Weak Thesis Statement

1) “A” is the weak thesis because it is too broad and it states what the author is going to write about.
2) “A” is a weak statement because it is just stating the obvious.
3) “B” is the weaker of the two because it just states that the jeans industry appeals to young adults. The other thesis is leaves more room for the reader to argue the point.
4) “A” is a very weak thesis that again just states the obvious and tells the reader what it’s about.
5) “A” is broke up into weak statements. “B” brings the statements together into a good thesis that is easier to read.